I used to write poems most time in Viet and if it doesn’t flow I’d chuck.
Lately I’ve been writing lots of stuff but no poems. Nothing flowed. Last night I wrote one . It was fun crafting it .
Crafting it looking for rhymes. Crafting it making sure it flowed.
I did start another one but it didn’t flow. Just got half way and saved it. It’s something new for me . Might work at it. It’s fun.
This is pretty much my style , in Viet and repetition. They are usually just short ones to convey what I want. And most time about love.
biết là tội lỗi
biết là sai lầm
biết là không lối thoát
biết là không hy vọng
biết là vẫn yêu
I know it’s sinful
I know it’s wrong
I know there’s no hope
I know there’s no way out
I know I still love you
Wrote this for Aub. It was a hopeless love.